Hmm. This one is actually a little harder for me to rate. I originally gave it four, but I think I am leaning more towards 3 stars — I think it would be a 3.5 star book, really, but not necessarily one you round up.
The novel opens with a bang — Erin, our protagonist, is panting in the woods as she is digging out a grave, trying to cut corners and avoid going six feet deep. Oh, and one more thing? The body she needs to bury is her husband’s. From here, the novel rewinds back, leading us up until this point. Erin is a documentary filmmaker working on her next film, which revolves around three different inmates for various crimes, and following them on their release day. Her fiance, Mark, is an investment banker, and the two are weeks away from their big wedding day. That’s when things start to unravel — Mark is fired from his job, and the two are now panicking about money.
They cancel all the extravagances of their wedding, opting for a smaller, low key option and reducing their honeymoon in Bora Bora from three weeks to two. While on the honeymoon, they’re sailing in the ocean when something hits the side of their boat. Thunk thunk thunk. Apprehensive, they peer over the side and notice hundreds of reams of paper just floating in the water. Thunk thunk thunk. Mark reaches over the side of the boat and extracts a big black, heavy bag that is padlocked close. He and Erin then put their diving gear on and go into the water, determined to see where this came from. Ten feet down, they spot it: a small plane, shipwrecked. Erin starts to panic and heads for the surface while Mark goes down to investigate. When he comes back up, he informs her that three people are in the plane, and that they are not very good people. The story really takes off from here, as Erin and Mark try to figure out what to do with the bag, if they should open it, and the consequences of the decision they make to, indeed, open the bag.
I have mixed feelings on this book for a few reasons. One, I wasn’t huge on the narrator. I just didn’t really like her voice, and it’s told through first person, so liking her voice is kind of important. I also just didn’t like her very much in general. She made very poor, impulsive decisions and never seemed to care or face much consequence, and she was also very greedy and a huge liar. At various points in the book, I just kept getting irritated and annoyed at how stupid she was and the stupid decisions and choices she was making.
Two, I really didn’t love the resolution. I had accurately guessed at several of the twists, but the payoff isn’t great because we never get the other side of the story. Erin decides things in her head and decides that’s why other character’s must have made the choices and decisions they did, but we never actually hear it out of the other character’s mouth. We’re supposed to just take it on Erin’s word that she is 100% correct in her assumptions. Considering what the reveal turns out to be, this was very disconcerting for me because I felt like there were a lot of obvious explanations for behaviors and decisions made, but she never explores them and just assumes that the worst must be true and that’s that.
Third, it takes entirely too long for the story to build. The bag hitting the boat is truly the catalyst of the novel, and that doesn’t happen until almost 40% into the book.
The positive is that once it does get going, you do end up being pulled in and it is a page turner that, I believe, you’ll really enjoy in the moment. I enjoyed it, at least, but it was after I had put the book down and started thinking about it that I realized that once the thrill of the ride is over, there are a lot of things that don’t make sense or are left unanswered or are just completely unsatisfying.
I enjoyed the book, but I think there was so much more that could have been done with it, hence rounding it down to a 3-star read.
Thank you to NetGalley for a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. Something in the Water is out now!